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My dream life
I am a girl who always dreams of the future, so the people around me think I am innocentce .
I ever sometimes just dreaming and do nothing, but now I realize that I must do truely things take some action meanwhile dreaming of my perfect life.
so That is why I want to improve my English during a short period of time and let me become more outgoing. I would be am glad if you can will make friends with me .
Thanks for your help on my composition (text/entry)~
I believe we can get a perfect life! Fighting for a dream!
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The ”I” pronoun in English is written in capital letter at all times.
”Innocent” is the adjective, ”innocence” is the noun.
You are welcome! Good luck with your studies!
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