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Birthday Hello Guys! Been a while don't write, here, but today I write a bit about the birthday of my friend Thereza. We eat at a restaurante called "Siri", our lunch was shrimp, rice, manioc flour and for drink soda. Our day was great! I went with my boyfriend, also had many Thereza's friends, there were over twenty peoples. Coming home happened a gunfight, unfortunately here is very dangerous.

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Birthday

Hello Guys!
It has (or It's) been a while that I didn't write, here, but today I write a bit about the birthday of my friend Thereza.
We ate at a restaurante called "Siri". Our lunch was shrimp, rice, manioc flour and for drinks we had soda.
Our day was great! I went with my boyfriend and Thereza had many friends. There were over twenty people. 
Coming home there happened to be a gunfight. Unfortunately it is very dangerous here.

 

I hope that helps

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Birthday

Hello Guys!
It has been a while that I didn't write, here, but today I write a bit about the birthday of my friend Thereza.
We eat at a restaurante called "Siri".Our lunch was shrimps, rice, manioc flour and for drinks, We had soda.
Our day was great! I went with my boyfriend, and Thereza had many friends. There were over twenty peoples.
Coming home there happened to be a gunfight. Unfortunately it is very dangerous, here.

 

*** Yes, thanks! You help me, so much!***

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