Friday
Today is sunny,I still go to work and work hard at my study,Sometimes I really fell a big stress on me,beacuse I don't want my elder brother to disappoint ,I want to be a postgraduate like my elder brother in the future ,I believe I can achieve my dream,now,I want to learn English well,I need your help.
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Today is sunny, but I still have to go to work and work hard at my study, so I cannot go out and enjoy the spring sun :( :(. Sometimes I really feel a big lot of stress weighing down on me, because I don't want my elder big brother to be disappointed in me, I want to be a postgraduate in the future, (put the time phrase closer to the verb 'want') like my elder big brother in the future. I believe I can achieve my dream - so now, I want to learn good English/English well, and I need your help.
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Friday
Today is sunny. I go to work, and I study hard. Sometimes I feel stressed, because I don't want to disappoint my older brother. My goal is to become a postgraduate like my older brother. I believe I can achieve my dream now. I want to learn english, but I need your help.
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learning for yourself and enjoying it.
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