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My lovely friend My birthday is only a few days away.Because my friend can not bring gift to me on that day,so she gave it to me yesterday.But,OMG! I was shocked when I opened the gift that she prepared for me.It is a pair of high-heel shoes! I have never wear it! I always wear flat shoes and I like flat shoes,because they wear comfortable and convenient.It is a very big challenge for me to wear high-heel shoes.And it is a pair of high heels of 10 cm! God! I even can not image how comical I am when I wear it to walk.I asked her why did she want to give me a pair of high-heel shoes as my birthday gift? She said,because you have never had one.And I hope it will makes you from a girl become a female.Well,she is really lovely and humorous,right?

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My lovely friend

My birthday is only a few days away. Because my friend can could not bring the gift to me on that day, so she gave it to me yesterday. But, OMG! I was shocked when I opened the gift that she prepared for me. It is was a pair of high-heel shoes! I have never wear worn it before! I always wear flat shoes and I like flat shoes, because they wear are comfortable and convenient. It is a very big challenge for me to wear high-heel shoes. And it is a pair of high heels of 10 cm high! God! I even can not image imagine how comical I am would be when I wear it to walk. I asked her why did she want wanted to give me a pair of high-heel shoes as for my birthday gift? She said, because you have never had one. And I hope it will makes you from a girl become a female woman. Well, she is really lovely and humorous, right?

 

 

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Haha, well, someday my friends might do the same since they have the same complaints. Actually my aunts do too. Hope you rock in those shoes!! 

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