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"Privacy is dead,
....This may seem to you like an extract from George Orwell’s famous novel, 1984, however (to avoid using 'but' twice) 'it’s actually not the words of Big Brother but the ones of someone you know much better and probably interact with every day: Facebook, the archetype of social media, the online communication channels devoted to content-sharing, interaction and community-based input.
Pete Cashmore once declared “Privacy is dead, and social media hold the smoking gun.” To put it simply, in our ultra connected society, does the word “privacy” still have a meaning?
First, we will discuss about the possible death of our privacy. Second, we will argue that social media are not necessarily to be considered as responsible. Third, we will consider whether this phenomenon has been as abrupt as suggested in the quote.
Nowadays, there is no need to be a secret agent of the NSA to know what Mr. X’s favourite movies are, where he lives, with whom he is married, what he looked like at the last party he went to, etc. (These are not questions. They are noun clauses and should be written like sentences, not questions.) By googling someone’s name (one's name = your own name), in 90% of the cases, you will find a photo of that person. However, this is only what you, as a random user of the internet, can find. As underlined at the beginning, with the quote of Facebook’s data policy, we immediately realise that every byte of information is being collected, stored and sold. With all these tiny but significant details, it’s a piece of cake for these corporations to make a meticulous and thorough summary of every user’s private and public life. At the present time, the huge majority of people communicates, exchanges and therefore, build their personal life thanks to these social media: you ask for some help with/from WhatsApp, invite your friends to your party this Friday via Facebook and call your grandmother on the other side of the planet using Skype! When we know that these pieces of information are all collected by social media, yes, we can confirm Pete Cashmore's statement: privacy is dead!
Interesting and well-written.
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