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I am so angry
I feel so sad these days. I fed a puppy a month ago. It is so cute. I like it very much. it was ill a week ago. and it spended a lot of money of my dad (Do you mean a lot of your dad's money was spent on the puppy? The puppy itself cannot spend money). Because I am still a studend student, I do not have a lot of money. some of my relatives (Plural) think it would spend a lot of money (Do you mean they think a lot of money will be spent on the puppy?). so they told me to give puppy away. my dad likes dogs so much. he allowed me to feed a dog. I can take care of my puppy . if it is just money problem I can do it. I will gratuate graduate from college this year. I can earn money by myself. it is really hurt 'It really hurts' or 'It is really hurting' my feelings (Usually refer to 'feelings' in plural form unless you are talking specifically about a feeling) that told me give my dog away. they scolded me when I fed feed a dog. it is useless but spend money (Not sure what this means. Did your relatives say this?) . The dog (do you mean the puppy?) makes me happy. I want to protect him. it is a life, not a toy. I feel so so so (one 'so'. You can add 'very' or its synonyms to express how angry it makes you feel) angry. what do you think?
Hi Chen. How are you? I can definitely relate. I had my first puppy when I was very young, against the wishes of my parents. Your relatives either do not understand the joy that comes from having a puppy or are concerned about how much of a responsibility it will be for you. Just focus on taking care of the puppy and having fun with it and not worry about anything else. I wish you all the best. What is the puppy's name?
Also, you are making some errors in punctuation so play close attention to that.
Errol
I am so angry
I feel so sad these days. I fed bought/got a puppy a month ago. It is so cute and I like it very much. it was became/fell ill a week ago and it spended my dad spent a lot of money of my dad to get it treated. Because I am still a studend student, I do not have a lot of money. Some of my relatives think it that keeping a puppy would spend cost a lot of money, so they told me to give puppy it away. But my dad likes dogs so much that he allowed me to feed keep a dog puppy. I can take care of my puppy it. If it the issue is just the lack of money problem, I can do resolve it. I will gratuate graduate from college this year and I can I'll be able to earn money by myself if I can get a job. It is really hurts my feelings that my relatives told me to give my dog puppy away. They even scolded chided me feed about keeping a dog puppy. They said it is useless but spend a waste of money. But the Dog puppy makes me happy. I want to protect him it. It is a life, not a toy. I feel so so so angry. What do you think?
ps: You're so lucky your dad allows you to keep the puppy! I really want a dog but my mum has a phobia :( Don't worry too much about what your relatives say about the puppy. As long as it makes you happy, who cares what they think! You can prove them wrong when you graduate and start making your own money to take good care of the puppy. 加油!狗狗是不会放弃的,别放弃一个有你与狗狗的幸福生活!:)
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