Nut Rage Incident

People work so hard to achieve a certain social status and earn people's respect. However, once they get to the point that they are able to exert any power with their status, they are bound to do pretty much so. Somehow, that makes them empowered and there doesn't seem to be a way out of it. I think that's why more and more power-driven crimes have been committed all over the world.

Quite recently, there has been media hype over 'power-driven crimes' here in Korea. However, these non-stop outbreaks only make people feel uncomfortable and resentful because they have been around for a long time and even now the media is ready to talk about it. And that's why some people are eager to point out that this might be a witch hunt case to cover up bigger political scandals like the Sewol ferry disaster.

Speaking of Heather Cho, the former Korean Air vice president who has been sentenced to a year in prison for violating aviation law and removing the chief flight attendant from a moving flight, she definitely crossed way over the line by abusing her power to the people who have been working for her. She treated them like pariahs or as if they were inferior to her. What's more bugging about it is that she appealed right after she was convicted. It seems like she is determined to push forward all the way to get away with her charges by using all of her resources and connections.

Why do these people never accept their mistakes and do their time in jail/prison? Why do we have to see them get away with their charges and feel resentful? All the more, why do we want to become like one in spite of all these people/this? Can we really blame them? This is like a vicious cycle that will never be severed no matter what. The only way to get out of this vicious cycle is to bring the justice to these people and make them realize the law applies equally to everybody. Given the fact that she appealed to the court, at least to me, it's perfectly clear that she is not reflecting at all.

Wow what a notebook entry.

Just a handful of minor errors. Some are subjective.

Bold = correction

Underline = grammatically correct but the flow sounds non-native

A lovely read you have excellent English.