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Ready to travel Vacation will start on tomorrow , I had planned to go to Yunnan , but news reports that too many people in Yunnan , so I changed my plan , I want to go to Guilin , although it's not a good time to go to Guilin in March, but there will not so many people and wouldn't be crowded , i just want to relax myself . I'm going to sleep on the first day of my vacation , because i was very tired during Spring Festival, the second and the third day , I'm going to go shopping , because the courier does not work during holiday , I can't buy things from the Internet , i can only go shopping , I want to buy some food and a pair of sports shoes. The fourth day can be ready to go . i am so excited now .

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Ready to travel

My vacation will start/starts on tomorrow , and although I had planned to go to Yunnan, I heard/read but news reports that too many people are travelling in Yunnan, so I changed my plan.  Now I want to go to Guilin, although it's March is not a good the best time to go to Guilin in March, but there will not be quite so many people and it won't wouldn't be crowded; I just want to relax myself . I'm going to sleep on the first day of my vacation, because I was have been very tired during throughout Spring Festival, particularly the second and the third days. I'm going to go shopping, because the courier does not work during holidays, so I can't buy things from the Internet, I can only go shopping. I want to buy some food and a pair of sports shoes. On the fourth day I can be ready prepare to travel go. I am so excited now.

 

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