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Diary 22 Feb. Yesterday, I was looking for the hotel for my trip in Norway and Denmark in April. The price of hotel is very expensive. I kept comparing the price. I took me a lot of time. Finally, I've done my hotel booking. Next step, I have to book the transport tickets. Planning trip is really a big job. I have to search a lot of information. But I enjoy it. Today, I went to Media City UK with my classmate. She is a Japanese. She is very kind and friendly. I like to spend time with her. Perhaps, both of us are Eastern, we have the similar culture, so we are talkative. After sightseeing Media City, we went to China Town. There were some celebration for Chinese New Year from 19th Feb. to 22th Feb. There were dance displays of Dragon's dramatic appearance at noon today, but we missed. Finally, we watched the fireworks which were shot for 15 minutes. It was a happy ending.

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Diary 22 Feb.

Yesterday, I was looking for the a hotel for my trip in to Norway and Denmark in April. The price of a hotel is very expensive. I kept comparing the prices. I took me a lot of time. Finally, I've done I made my hotel booking. Next step, I have to book the transportation tickets. Planning a trip is really a big job. I have to search for a lot of information. But I enjoy it.

Today, I went to Media City UK with my classmate. She is a Japanese. She is very kind and friendly. I like to spend time with her. Perhaps, because both of us are Eastern, and we have the a similar culture, so we are talkative. After sightseeing visiting Media City, we went to China Town. There were some celebrations for Chinese New Year from Feb. 19th to Feb. 22nd. There were dance displays of the Dragon's dramatic appearance at noon today, but we missed it. Finally, we watched the fireworks which were shot lasted for 15 minutes. It was a happy ending.

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Diary 22 Feb.

Yesterday, I was looking for a the hotel for my trip to in Norway and Denmark in April. The cost price of a hotel  is very expensive so I kept comparing the prices which I took me a lot of  long time. (it is better to try and combine short sentences into one longer one using connecting words such as "so" and "which")  Finally, I've finally made done my hotel booking and my  next step is  I have to book the transport tickets for the transportation. Planning a trip is really a big job/a lot of work as I have to do a lot of research a lot of information. but I enjoy it. 


Today, I went to Media City, UK with my classmate who is a  She is a Japanese. She is very kind and friendly Japonese girl. I like to spend time with her perhaps because  both of us are Eastern, we have the similar Asian cultures and as a result  so we are very talkative. After sightseeing Media City, we went to China Town where there was a were some celebration going on for Chinese New Year which is from 19th Feb. to 22th Feb. There were dramatic dancing displays of Dragons dramatic appearance at noon today, but we missed seeing them. Finally, we watched the fireworks which lasted were shot for 15 minutes. It was a happy ending to the day.

Well done iBee!  Keep up your good work!

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