Formal E-mail to a US University

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Dear Mr. name surname

I was browsing the Iowa State University website and found a scholarship, called 'Scholarship for Excellence'.

From the eligibility requirements I could not make up couldn't see if international students are considered eligible for this scholarship as well.

Could you provide me with that information let me know if international students are able to make an application? [In formal letters we often write out questions in full to avoid any misunderstanding]

Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter.

Sincerely,

Virginie Wylleman

Formal E-mail to a US university

does this contain any mistakes?

Dear Mr. name surname

I was browsing the Iowa State University website and found a scholarship called 'Scholarship for Excellence'.
From the eligibility requirements I could not make up determine if international students are considered for this scholarship as well.
Could you provide me with that information?

Thank you in advance for your attention to this matter.

Sincerely,

Virginie Wylleman