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the same ole the same ole Well I thought I would write this before nevertheless I've been very tied up . This morning I woke up at 5 am as usual then I had my breakfast. I had a cup of coffee I ate a nice couple of baleadas. Baleadas it's a dish originally from Honduras. It make with tortillas which It comes with egg, beans, avocado and you can add whichever thing if you wish whether it cheese or something else. After that I had my hair cut, got back home, I get dressed up and left home to go to the down town to do some errands but when i was going to the down town I had a downside with my motorcycle a tire pop. So i left it behind and started walkimg while I was walking I ran into a friend that i hadn't seen for a long time. And he took me so I would've to walk. Then I did what I had to domy friend and me went to have lunch. When we done he took me back home. After that I was reading for nearly 1 hour I came across an interesting article on internet about a complex topic security,corruption I thought it was going to be easy to understand although turned out to be harder than I though as to that I couldn't wrap my head around the subject, because there were a lot of words in english tecnical"tecnico" I learnd some new bussiness words though. which is very nice because i want to grown in setting work. That't it. Please point out my mistakes.

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the same ole the same ole

Well I thought I would write this before neverthelesshowever nevertheless is used when x happens even though y happened I've been very tied up .

 


This morning I woke up at 5 am as usual then I had my breakfast. I had a cup of coffee and
I ate a nice couple of baleadas. Baleadas it'sis you don't need the pronoun 'it' if you've already named what you're talking about

a dish originally from Honduras. ItI make with tortillas which It comes with egg, beans, avocado and you can add whichever thing if you wishwhatever you like your construction is ok but this is much smoother :) whether it is cheese or something else. After that I had my hair cut, got back home, I get got  past tense dressed up and left home to go to the downtown to do some errands but when i was going to the downtown I had a downside problem with my motorcycle: a tire popflat tire.

 

So i left it behind and started walkimg walking. typo? While I was walking I ran into a friend that i hadn't seen for a long time. And he took me so I would've gave me a ride so that I didn't haveyou definitely need the negative construction in here to make sure people know you didn't end up walking! to walk.

 

Then I did what I had to do my friend and meI went to have lunch. When we were done he took me back home. After that I was reading read simple past is smoother here :) for nearly 1 hour, I came across an interesting article on the internet requires a definite article internet about a complex topic: security and for two items in a list join them with and, not a comma corruption.

 

I thought it was going to be easy to understand althoughbut it a similar error to 'nevertheless' although is used when you are adding additional, maybe contrary information, not a direct contradiction turned out to be harder than I thought as to that I couldn't wrap my head around the subject, because there were a lot of words in english tecnical"tecnico" jargonuseful word to know! I learned some new bussiness 1 s, then 2 - business! words though, which is very nice because i want to grown in setting improve in my work. That'ts it. 

Please point out my mistakes.

Well done Samuel, you were brave in using some complex language here, just a few things to go over!

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