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我最近看《人在囧途》。这部电影有两个人物:李成功和牛耿。李成功是老板,牛耿是挤奶者。他们的性格截然不同。牛耿急于相信大家说的话是真的 (Niu Geng is eager to believe what everyone says),并愿意给他们帮助(and willing to help them),其实甚至与愿意得把钱分给一个女骗子(in fact he is so eager to help that he tries to give a female thief all of his money)。反过来,李成功因跟骗子打交道的经验很多,而怀疑他们所谓的不幸 (on the other hand, because Li Chenggong has had a lot of experience dealing with scammers, he doubts there so-called misfortune)。
在帮别人的方面,我的态度跟李成功的态度一样是怀疑派(In regards to helping other people, my attitude is similar to Li Cheng Gong’s)。尽管我很想跟牛耿一样乐于助人(even though I want to be like Niu Geng),不过我都不知道那个人是否真的需要帮助(whether or not a person needs help I cannot see)。假如我把钱给了一个只是想容易地得到钱的人,怎么办 (If I give money to someone who just wants to get easy money, then what)?毕竟,我不想让说谎者继续这样做下去(After all, I don’t want to encourage liars to continue taking from others),但是这样作法的结果是真正需要帮助的穷人被忽视(but this method results in ignoring truly needy people)。
A native speaker in Chinese use "人格" to judge a people good or bad, when we want to describe what kind of this person, we usually us "性格"
“鼓励” in Chinese means encourage, but good things follow this word in most times. For example, 鼓励你学习(encourage you to study)
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我最近看了《人在囧途》。这部电影有两个主要人物( two main characters):李成功和牛耿。李成功是老板,牛耿是挤奶工者。他们的性格人格截然不同。牛耿急于相信大家说的话是真的 (Niu Geng is eager to believe what everyone says),并愿意给他们帮助他们 (and willing to help them),其实甚至与愿意得把所有的(all of)钱分给一个女骗子(in fact he is so eager to help that he tries to give a female thief all of his money)。反过来,李成功因跟骗子打交道的经验很多而怀疑他们所谓的不幸 (on the other hand, because Li Chenggong has had a lot of experience dealing with scammers, he doubts there so-called misfortune)。
在帮别人的方面,我的态度跟李成功的态度一样怀疑派(In regards to helping other people, my attitude is similar to Li Cheng Gong’s)。尽管我很想跟牛耿一样好(even though I want to be like Niu Geng),不过我察觉不了是否一个人真的需要我帮忙无论一个人真的需要帮助我都不知道(whether or not a person needs help I cannot see)。如果我把钱给了一个只想不劳而获的人怎么办?假如一个人为了容易地得到钱把手钩,怎么办 (If I give money to someone who just wants to get easy money, then what)?毕竟,我不想鼓励骗子继续欺骗别人,毕竟不想无意中鼓励说谎者做下去(After all, I don’t want to encourage liars to continue taking from others),但是这样作法的结果是穷人被忽视(but this method results in ignoring truly needy people)。
20150220
我最近看《人在囧途》。这部电影有两个人物:李成功和牛耿。李成功是老板,牛耿是挤奶者。他们的人格截然不同。牛耿急于相信大家说的话是真的 (Niu Geng is eager to believe what everyone says),并愿意给他们帮助 (and willing to help them),其实甚至与愿意得把钱分给一个女骗子(in fact he is so eager to help that he tries to give a female thief all of his money)。反过来,李成功因跟骗子打交道的经验很多,而怀疑他们所谓的不幸 (on the other hand, because Li Chenggong has had a lot of experience dealing with scammers, he doubts there so-called misfortune)。
在帮别人的方面,我的态度跟李成功的态度一样是怀疑派(In regards to helping other people, my attitude is similar to Li Cheng Gong’s)。尽管我很想跟牛耿一样乐于助人(even though I want to be like Niu Geng),不过我都不知道那个人是否真的需要帮助(whether or not a person needs help I cannot see)。假如我把钱给了一个只是想容易地得到钱的人,怎么办 (If I give money to someone who just wants to get easy money, then what)?毕竟,我不想让说谎者继续这样做下去(After all, I don’t want to encourage liars to continue taking from others),但是这样作法的结果是真正需要帮助的穷人被忽视(but this method results in ignoring truly needy people)。
“鼓励” in Chinese means encourage, but good things follow this word in most times. For example, 鼓励你学习(encourage you to study)
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