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My Good Luck Last night was the Tet's Eve in my country. I stayed up past midnight to say best wishes to my family. This is my ritual at the first moment of the Lunar New Year. I have a habit that I often turn off my mobile phone after work. Yesterday wasn't an exception. After our reunion on the occasion of the New Year, I went to bed and turned on my moblie phone to check my emails. An email from a company where offered me an online job invited me to a survey. I quickly turned on the light and my personal computer so that I could right away did that survey, since sometimes in the past, I missed the opportunities to make the honest money via the Internet. One of my family members joked with me that I will be very lucky in this New Year, because after a few minutes of the New Year, I got such a good luck. This boosted my belief about my brighter future. By the way, on the Lunar New Year, I wish all of you good health, happiness and prosperities.

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My Good Luck

Last night was the Tet's Eve in my country. I stayed up past midnight to say best wishes to my family. This is my ritual at the first moment of the Lunar New Year.

I have a habit that I often turn off my mobile phone after work. Yesterday wasn't an exception. After our reunion on the occasion of the New Year, I went to bed and turned on my moblie phone to check my emails. An email from a company where which offered me an online job invited me to a survey. I quickly turned on the light and my personal computer so that I could right away did do that survey, since sometimes in the past, I missed the opportunities to make the honest money via the Internet.

One of my family members joked with me that I will be very lucky in this New Year, because after a few minutes of the New Year, I got had such a good luck. This boosted my belief about my brighter future.

By the way, on the Lunar New Year, I wish all of you good health, happiness and prosperities prosperity.

 

It is a better style usually (always?) to put the adverb after the verb. Example: "i could do that survey right away"

People can "get lucky", but luck, the noun, is something that you have.

I don't believe there is a plural for prosperity.

Good luck to you, CD

 

 

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Thank you so much for your kind words, Spanish19!
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What a nice story ????. I hope you are being lucky this year and keep your job and that all your purposes make right! Regards

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