Spring Festval
Today is the Chinese traditional festival---Spring Festival. I was so happy and hope my family will health all the year. There are many activities to celebrate it. mostly, visiting friends is the most important point in China.I also will visit grandmother tomorrow, and hope to receive as many as lucky money.Therefore, my wish in this new year is: hope everybody can keep a good health and earn more money,and then enjoy the everyday life.
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Spring Festval
Today is the Chinese traditional festival---Spring Festival. I *was so happy and hope my family will *health all *the year. There are many activities to celebrate it. *mostly, visiting friends is the most important *point in China.I also will visit *grandmother tomorrow, and hope to receive *as many as lucky money.Therefore*, my wish *in this new year is:* hope everybody can *keep a good health and earn more money,and then enjoy the* everyday life.
Spring Festival
Today is the Chinese traditional festival---the Spring Festival. I am so happy and hope my family will have good health all through the year. There are many activities to celebrate (it); visiting friends is the most important in China. I (also) will visit my grandmother tomorrow, and hope to receive some lucky money. (Therefore,) My wish for this new year is to hope everyone can stay in good health and earn more money, and then enjoy every day life.
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