Always be yourself!!!

One famous man said: "If you wanna[want to] be somebody, somebody really special, be yourself." I agree with the author, because you can see yourself as Miley Cyrus, Emma Watson, Kristen Stewart etc. but you all are the same you. Nobody's perfect, if you really wanna[want to] be special, you should work. If you wanna[want to] have a slim and healthy body-eat only healthy food, if you wanna[want to] have many friends-be interesting. You make your day, week. month. year, you make your life, and only you can make it perfect, just work and be yourself.)))

If you want your English to improve Darya, try to resist using words like 'wanna'.  :)

You're right, only actors should try to be someone else!

Everybody is 'somebody special', but it can take a while for anyone outside your family to realise. :(

My idea of 'perfect' will involve another person in my life - somebody special!

Always be yourself!!!

One famous man said: "If you wanna be somebody, somebody really special, be yourself." I agree with the author. cause You can see yourself as Miley Cyrus, Emma Watson, Kristen Stewart, etc, but you're all the same you. Nobody's perfect. If you really wanna be special, you should work. If you wanna have a slim and healthy body, eat only healthy food. If you wanna have many friends, be interesting. You make your day, week, month, year. You make your life. And only you can make it perfect. Just work and be yourself.)))

Darlya,  You're English is quite good.  You only left out a few words like the, 're, and a.  I suggest you read what you write out loud to your self or have someone else read it out loud for you to hear, and you will probably be able to hear where these missing words should have been.

You mostly need to work on your punctuation and avoid making the sentences too long.  Break them up into shorter sentences and use periods.