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Oh I know I have made sooo many mistakes, but correct me please. I need to describe a film _____________________________ Recently I have seen the film. It is Vampire Academy by Mark Waters. Vampire Academy it is the horror , a fantasy and a comedy film. Events take place in the Montana .There is a real Academy, where vampires learn the magic skills. there are Dampier and Moroi in the world . Moroi is a vampire, have magical powers: water, fire, earth or air . Dampier it is half of Moroi , and half of a man . They have no magic, but they study at the academy because they have to protect Morois from strigois .Strigoi it's Moroi, who once killed a man, now he became immortal and thirsted in kill.This story is about two girls . Best friends Rose and Lissa are experiencing various adventures, check their friendship, love experiencing suffering and loss , and sooner or later to each of them will stand a difficult choice regarding their life and future.I liked this film. Actors had played great , the , music is nice , the plot is very exciting. I recommend this film for those who liked fantasy films about vampires .

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Oh I know I have made sooo many mistakes, but correct me please.

I need to describe a film:
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Recently I have seen the saw a film . It is called Vampire Academy by Mark Waters. Vampire Academy it is the a horror, a fantasy, and a comedy film and its events take place in the Montana. There is a real Academy where vampires learn the magic skills. There are Dampiers and Morois in the world. A Moroi is a vampire which has have magical powers that combine the elements: water, fire, earth or and air. A Dampier it is half of Moroi and half of a man. They have no magic, but they study at the academy because they have to protect the Morois from the Strigois. A Strigoi it's is a Moroi who once killed a human and is now he became immortal and bloodthirsty. thirsted in kill. This story is about two girls, best friends Rose and Lissa, who experience are experiencing various adventures and test check their friendship and love while experiencing suffering and loss. and Sooner or later, to each of them will face stand a difficult choice regarding their life and future. I liked this film. The actors had played were great, the music is was nice, and the plot is was very exciting. I recommend this film for those who like d fantasy films about vampires.

 

You have described it well. It sounds scary to me!

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Oh I know I have made sooo many mistakes, but correct me please.

I need to describe a film
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Recently I watched a film. It is Vampire Academy by Mark Waters. Vampire Academy is horror, fantasy and comedy film. The events take place in the Montana .There is a real academy, where vampires learn magic skills. There are Dampiers and Morois in the world . Morois are vampires and have magical powers: water, fire, earth or air . Dampiers are half Moroi

and half human. They have no magic, but they study at the academy because they have to protect Morois from Strigois. A Strigoi is a Moroi who has killed a man and now he has become immortal and thirsts to kill.This story is about two girls . Best friends Rose and Lissa experience various adventures, check their friendship and love while experiencing suffering and loss, and sooner or later each of them faces a difficult choice regarding their life and future.I liked this film. The actors were great , the music is nice and the plot is very exciting. I recommend this film to those who like fantasy films about vampires .

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Oh I know I have made sooo many mistakes, but correct me please.

I need to describe a film
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Recently I have seen this film. It's title is "Vampire Academy" by Mark Waters. Vampire Academy it is the a horror, a fantasy and a comedy [horror/fantasy/comedy] film. Events take place in the state of Montana. There is a real Academy, where vampires learn the magic skills. There are Dampier and Moroi in the world. Moroi is a type of vampire, who have magical powers involving the elements: water, fire, earth or air. Dampier it is are half of Moroi , and half of a human. They have no magic, but they study at the academy because they have to protect Morois from Strigois. Strigoi it's are Moroi, who having once killed a man, now he became immortal and bloodthirstyed in kill. This story is primarily about two girls. Best friends Rose and Lissa are experiencing various adventures, checking their friendship, and love while experiencing suffering and loss. and Sooner or later to each of them will stand face a difficult choice regarding their life and future. I liked this film. The actors had played were great, the, music is was nice, the plot is was very exciting. I recommend this film for those who liked fantasy films about vampires.

 

I haven't seen this film Lisa but I'll watch it if I can.

I referred to this description: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vampire_Academy_%28film%29

It looks like a lot of errors, but it's still understandable.

Den

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