Fuyu to naru

Maine no fuyu wa samui. Maine no fuyu no aida wa uwagi to mimiate to mafura to tebukuro o haoranakereba narimasen. Fuyu wa yuki to kouri ga arimasu.

Haru wa atatakai desu. Yuki wa tokemasu. Sangatsu ni haru ni narimasu. Ame ga takusan furimasu. Amerika nimo sakura ga arimasu. Sakura ya ume ya tanpopo ga sakimasu.

Well done. Most of the corrections were to particles, and in my opinion, you don't necessarily need to give much attention to them until you reach the intermediate level, in the same way as you wouldn't recmmmend English learners be too strict to the correct usage of prepositions. Jimo tho.