February 16th
Today I'm not happy, I'm weird today. I'm sad, but I don't know the cause. Now I must Study in class. I just want go to home NOW.All stay better if I sleep.
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February 16th
I'm not happy today, and I feel weird and sad. I don't know the cause of my feelings. I just want to go home now. If I go to sleep instead of attending this class, I will feel better.
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February 16th
Today I'm not happy, I feel weird today. I'm sad, but I don't know the cause. Now I must study in class. I just want go home NOW. It will get better if I sleep.
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February 16th
Today I'm not happy, I'm weird today (this doesn't sound natural, "I feel weird" is better). I'm sad, but I don't know the cause. Now I must study in class. I just want go to home NOW. All will stay better if I sleep ("everything will be/get better if I sleep" sounds more natural).
Your english is generally correct but it is quite formal. For example, in spoken language we almost never use the the verb "must", instead we say "I have to". Also "I don't know the cause" sounds excessively formal, "I don't know why" is better.
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February 16th
Today I'm not happy, I'm weird today. I'm sad, but I don't know the cause. Now I must Study in class. I just want go to home NOW.All will become better if I sleep.
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