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It´s Wrong but I Like Red Wine. I shall try to explain my plan. I´m working an idea that if it works... it works out my economy. It´s about red wine. I shall buy a lot of gallons of red wine and I will put on them into a ship. While the ship is sailing by the deep blue see ( nice phrase I had heard over there), the wine will change in vinegar, and when the ship cames to the port I will sell the vinegar. With the earnings I will have I shall buy more red wine and the next time I will chárter two ships, later three and ...I will be rich! What do you think about this? So long!

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It´s Wrong but I Like Red Wine.

I shall try ("will try" is more common) to explain my plan. I´m working on an idea that if it works... it works out my economy it will make me rich.
It´s about red wine. I shall (will) buy a lot of red wine (or "many gallons of red wine") and I will put on them into on a ship.
While the ship is sailing by on the deep blue see ( nice phrase I had heard over there), the wine will change into vinegar, and when the ship cames to the port I will sell the vinegar.
With the earnings I will have, I shall (will) buy more red wine and the next time I will chárter two ships, later three and ...I will be rich!
What do you think about this?

So long!

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