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Storm, snow and cold This morning before talking whith cat in a hat (thanks again cat in a hat) I was wacthing a video on-line from abc news. The new was about snow storm in Boston. There is a lot of snow and they are melting it with a machine that I have never seen, they call it melter. This made me remember a new that I wacth on spanish tv some days ago about snow. In some places of spain there is the same problem that they have in Boston, because some years ago when there is a lot of snow they usally trhew it to the river, but rigth now it's not allowed to do it because the salt we use to melt the snow and ice is not good for the river envirioment. So, It's a big problem because anybody knows where to move the snow away. I think that melter machine could be the solution for that problem.

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Storm, snow and cold

This morning, before talking whith cat in a hat (thanks again cat in a hat) I was watching a video on-line from ABC News. The news was about snowstorm in Boston. There is a lot of snow and they are melting it with a machine that I have never seen, they call it a melter. This made me remember a news story that I watched on Spanish TV some days ago about snow. In some places in Spain there is the same problem that they have in Boston, because some years ago when there was a lot of snow they usually threw it into the river, but right now they're not allowed to do it because the salt we use to melt the snow and ice is not good for the river environment. So, it's a big problem because nobody knows where to move the cleared snow away. I think the melter machine could be the solution for that problem.

 

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