Transport.Would someone correct this for me? Thank you very much.
I really like cycling, when I was younger I found it the quickest way to cross my busy city without traffic jam and stucks . I set off my journey at 8.00 a.m. and I went to my work-place everyday, I also remember even I was ahead of the buses, though I sometimes I could not go as fast as liked. I really enjoyed to see how the Traffic lights turned red and everybody was stressed, however once I got into the bus lanes and I almost crased intoa bus, fortunately I just fell down on ground without huting myself. Since then I began to go everywhere on food and take my car when I need to go for shopping to the mall.
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Transport.Would someone correct this for me? Thank you very much.
I really like cycling, when I was younger I found it the quickest way to cross my busy city without traffic jams and stucks . I set off on my journey at 8.00 a.m. and I went to my work place everyday, I also remember even I was ahead of the buses, though I sometimes I could not go as fast as I liked. (This sentence is unclear) I really enjoyed to see seeing how the Traffic lights turned red and everybody was stressed. however Once I got into the bus lanes and I almost crashed into a bus, fortunately I just fell down on the ground without hurting myself. Since then I began to go everywhere on food foot and take my car when I need to go for shopping to the mall.
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