Anout myself (About)

The first composition I would like to write is something about myself. 
First of all, I am a university students in Guangdong province. I major in English Education, which means that I will probably be an English teacher in the future. (Instead of saying "which means" you can word it this way "I am majoring in English and am hoping to become a teacher in the near future." ) However, I can not denny (deny) that I still have a long way to go before I become a qualified teacher due to my poor English as well as my rare teaching experience. (Instead of saying it like that I would rewrite it to "however I am still in the process of bettering my English skill as it is still not up to par, also I don't have much teaching experience.") 

Apart from what I have mentioned before, I would also like to tell you what kind of person I am. Though ( Although instead of though) (missing and "I")  am a girl, I am not so like a real girl.(rewrite to say "I am not as feminine as most girls.") Or rather (rewrite to say "I would rather" ), I sometimes feel myself more like a boy because I prefer to drive my bike (what do you mean by bike? Is it a motorbike? Or a bicycle bike?) and play billiards rather than go shopping and talk about the fashion. Of course, I still the quiet side as I like reading, especially the reading that is very literacy.(rewrite to say "I'm also a very introverted person, I enjoy quiet atmosphere' s where I can enjoy reading literature filled books.") Also, I enjoy writing, such as poems or proses, in Chinese not in English since I am not good at English writing. Ok, I think that is the end.( rewrite to say "I also enjoy writing, such as poems short stories and such. I mostly write them in Chinese as to my English skills is still a work in progress. That's the end of my self introductory." )

Hope my little notes help' :)

About Me myself

The first composition I would like to write is something about myself.
First of all, I am a university students in Guangdong province. I am majoring in English Education, which means that I will probably be an English teacher in the future. However, I cannot denny that I still have a long way to go before I become a qualified teacher due to my poor English as well as my rare lack of teaching experience.
Apart from what I have mentioned before, I would also like to tell you what kind of person I am. Though I am a girl, I am not so like a real girl. Or rather, I sometimes feel myself more like a boy because I prefer to drive ride my bike and play billiards rather than go shopping and talk about the fashion. Of course, I have a still the quiet side as I like reading, especially the reading that is very literacy. Also, I also enjoy writing, such as poems or prose, in Chinese not in English since I am not good at English writing. Ok, I think that is the end.

About myself

    The first composition I would like to write is something about myself.
    First of all, I am a university students in Guangdong province. I major in English Education, which means that I will probably be an English teacher in the future. However, I can not denny that I still have a long way to go before I become a qualified teacher due to my poor English as well as my rare teaching experience.
    Apart from what I have mentioned before, I would also like to tell you what kind of person I am. Though I am a girl, I am not so like a real girl. Or rather, I sometimes feel myself more like a boy because I prefer to drive my bike and play billiards rather than go shopping and talk about the fashion. Of course, I still the quiet side as I like reading, especially the reading that is very literacy. Also, I enjoy writing, such as poems or proses, in Chinese not in English since I am not good at English writing. Ok, I think that is the end.