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My New Movie Today I saw movie about hard humanity problems. It wasn't amazing movie for me, because I didn't understand it. Two men are going all movie, listening thoughts of different people and discussing. Sometimes they can help someone, but sometimes they can't. So, that's all for 1st essay.

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My New Movie

 

Today, I saw a movie about hard  difficult problems regarding humanity or "about difficult problems facing humanity". It wasn't an amazing movie for me, because I didn't understand it or "because I didn't understand most/much of it." Two men appear throughout the entire movie, listening to the thoughts of different people and (then) discussing them. Sometimes, they can help the people, but sometimes they can't.


So, that's all for my 1st or "first" essay.

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My New Movie

 

Today I saw a movie about hard difficult problems regarding humanity problems. It wasn't an amazing movie for me, because I didn't understand it. Two men appear throughout the are going all movie, listening to thoughts of different people and discussing them. Sometimes they can help someone, but sometimes they can't.


So, that's all for my 1st first essay.

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