I Love Reading Books

Reading books is one of my hobbies. When I was a kid, I usually often went to my grandpa’s house. , and I found numerous books there. I was just a student in a primary school, so I was afraid that I cannot could not read them. Nonetheless, my grandpa encouraged me to choose a book from them and read it. I started reading at that time. Finally In the end, I was fascinated with books.

Nowadays, reading books is not only my hobby, but also my habit. I read books everyday every day. Books kindle my enthusiasm, and the willing desire to be a wise man. Reading makes me peaceful. I will read more and more books in the future. I love reading books!

A lovely piece of writing, William! Very few corrections, and mostly just minor tweaks. A couple of points:

1. Stylistically I think it's better to avoid starting a sentence with 'and' (although it's not wrong, strictly speaking).

2. When speaking in the past tense, 'cannot' becomes 'could not'.

3. The use of 'usually' in the first paragraph made me expect something else - for instance 'I usually went there to read a book'. Without anything extra given, I think 'often' sounds better here.