Who am I ？
 

Sometimes, I'm confident about myself. I'm sure about what kind of life I want to have and what kind of person I want to be. But sometimes, some things make me so confused about myself. It is difficult to avoid the influence of others. I know that we shouldn't just live for ourselves, we should consider others' opinions when we make any choice or decision. Sometimes, even if you are right when most of (most people think...) others think you are wrong, what should you do? Would you change youself or to change others? Now I feel like myself, but I don't know whether I can continue to be myself or not in the future.

Good morning Julia!
Not so sure if all my corrections are accurate. I ended up making some little changes on words that did not sound very natural. You did a great job! Regarding your question, I don't think you should try to change yourself to please others. We are what we are; everybody has their own essence, like it or not. The most important thing is to be satisfied with the type of human you have become. If your personality makes yourself happy, that is what matters!

:)