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As I get older.... As I get older, I have a lot of thoughts in my mind. I am worried about my retirements and future. I had a lot of dreams when I was in 20's. I achieved my dream even though I didn't earn a lot of money. I really want to have more dreams so that I can have motivations to live actively and passionately. My dream is to run a small cafeteria on the beautiful coast in rural area, which is calm and peaceful. I hope I will drink coffee with sweet cookies and muffins with my old friend. Can I achieve my dream someday? I am not sure I will do it. But I definitely trust myself and I will try to make my dream come true. I regret not working hard and waste a lot of time and money. If I could go back to that time, I would change my whole life. It's not too late to start something as I am still young. There are a lot of young people who already give up their dream. I know the recent economic state gives no hopes to young people in Korea. Many young Korean have give up marriages, giving a birth and even love. Just keep your dream and believe it will be achieved someday. I am 100% sure that it will be achieved someday.

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As I get older....

As I get older, I have a lot of thoughts in my mind. I am worried about my retirement and future. I had a lot of many dreams when I was in my 20's. I achieved most of my dreams although I did not become wealthy even though I didn't earn a lot of money. I really want to have more, new, dreams so that I can have am motivated ions to live actively and passionately. My number one dream now is to run a small cafeteria in a calm peaceful rural area on the beautiful coast in rural area, which is calm and peaceful. I hope I will drink coffee with sweet cookies and muffins with my old friends. Can I achieve my dream someday? I am not sure I will do it. But I definitely trust myself and I will try to make my dream come true? I would regret not working hard, or and wasting a lot of time and or money. If I could go back to that in time, I would change my whole life. It's not too late to start something as I am still young. Yet there are a lot of so many young people who have already given up their dreams. I know the recent economic situation state  gives young Korean people no little cause for hopes to young people in Korea. Many young Koreans have given up on marriages, giving a birth having children, and even love. Just keep your dream and believe it will be achieved someday. I am 100% sure that it will be achieved someday.

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As I get older....

As I get older, I have a lot of thoughts in my mind. I am worried about my retirement and future. I had a lot of dreams when I was in my 20S. I achieved my dream even though I didn't earn a lot of money. I really want to have more dreams so that I can have motivations to live actively and passionately. My dream is to run a small cafeteria on the beautiful coast in a rural area which is calm and peaceful. I hope I will drink coffee with sweet cookies and muffins with my old friend. Can I achieve my dream someday? I am not sure I will do it. But I definitely trust myself and I will try to make my dream come true. I regret not working hard and wasting a lot of time and money. If I could go back to that time, I would change my whole life. It's not too late to start something as I am still young. There are a lot of young people who already gave up their dream. I know the recent economic state gives no hopes to young people in Korea. Many young Korean have given up marriage, giving birth and even love. Just keep your dream and believe it will be achieved someday. I am 100% sure that it will be achieved someday.

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Eric : yes, it's the same recently
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it makes sense to put chinese instead of korean too.

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