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I lost my puppy. I am so sad today because I lost my puppy 2 days ago. I met her 14 years ago and raised her like my daughter. She always followed me whenever I worked in my house. She always looked at me and interested in any movements I made. She hates walking outside. I tried to work around my village with her but she denied that at times. so I can't understand why she ran away from my house. I heard that story from my mother. so I asked my mother post the handout about her details on a telephone pole because I lived in another city which is very far from . But she rejected my proposal. So I also asked my brother but he didn't answered. I am so frustrated by my family. They din't love my puppy and accepted her as our family. I couldn't understand my family. It's really easy thing to post it. When I told about the story to my friend, my friend really cried and she would find my puppy for me. I think my friend is better than my family. I am so worried about my puppy because it's very very cold outside. The temperature is almost under -10 degrees. I hope that someone found her and brought her into the house so that she couldn't be die. I prayed and prayed to the god. I really miss my puppy....

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I lost my puppy.

I am so sad today because I lost my puppy 2 days ago. I met her 14 years ago and raised her like my daughter. She always followed me whenever I worked in my house. She always looked at me and was interested in any movements I made. She hated walking outside. I tried to work walk around my village with her but sometimes she denied that at times refused to obey. So I can't understand why she ran away from my house. I heard that story from my mother. So I asked my mother to post the a handout about with her details on a telephone pole because I lived in another city, which is very far from away. But she rejected my proposal. So I also asked my brother but he didn't answered. I am so frustrated by with my family. They didn't love my puppy and or accepted her as our family. I couldn't can't understand my family. It's a really easy thing to post it. When I told about the story to my friend, my friend really cried and she said she would help me find my puppy for me. I think my friend is better than my family. I am so worried about my puppy because it's very very cold outside. The temperature is almost under -10 degrees. I hope that someone found her and brought her into the house so that she couldn't be won't die. I prayed and prayed to the god. I really miss my puppy....

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pengyongchina: thank-you for your praise. Ahmed : Thank you for your warm comment. I hope I will meet her soon
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sorry*
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worry to hear that , maybe she did not run away from the house maybe she has stolen or something like that . i hope you find your puppy as soon as possible
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你写得真好!

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