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one part of the day with my son I want to write about how I spent one part of the day with my son. At the morning we had a breakfast, than we went to the bathroom and washed ourselves. After that we plaied in room. We read any books about animals and transport. At 11 am o`clock we were going to go for a walk. We taked some white bread for birds. At the park we saw a woman, who fed pigeons. Where were so many pigeons! We stopped near. I took Misha from stroller and put his on a snow. We started to feed pigeons too! My son was very surprised and interested this event. We stood there about 30 minutes, after that we went to home.

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one part of the day with my son

I want to write about how I spent one part of the day with my son. At the morning we had a breakfast, than we went to the bathroom and washed ourselves. After that we plaied in room. We read any books about animals and transport. At 11 am o`clock we were going to go for a walk. We taked some white bread for birds. At the park we saw a woman, who fed pigeons. Where were so many pigeons! We stopped near. I took Misha from stroller and put his on a snow. We started to feed pigeons too! My son was very surprised and interested this event. We stood there about 30 minutes, after that we went to home.

 

'At the morning we had a breakfast' :  In the morning we had breakfast

'we plaied in room' :  we played in the room

'We read any books' :  We read (some) books

'At 11 am o'clock we were going to go for a walk' :  At 11 o'clock we went for a walk

'We taked some white bread for birds' :  We took (with us) some white bread for the birds

'who fed pigeons' :  who was feeding the pigeons

'Where were so many pigeons!' :  There were so many of them ! [pigeons]

'We stopped near.' :  We stopped/stayed nearby.

'I took Misha from stroller and put his on a snow.' :  I took Misha from the stroller and put him down on the snow.

'We started to feed pigeons too!' :  We started to feed the pigeons too!

'My son was very surprised and interested this event.' :  My son was very surprised and he enjoyed this.

'after that we went to home' :  and after that we went home

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One part of the day with my son

I want to write about how I spent one part of the day with my son. At the morning we had a breakfast, then we went to the bathroom and washed ourselves. After that we played in a room. We read any some books about animals and transport. At 11 am o`clock we were going to go went for a walk. We taked took some white bread for birds. At the park we saw a woman, who fed pigeons. Where There were so many pigeons! We stopped nearby. I took Misha from the stroller and put his him in the snow. We started to feed pigeons too! My son was very surprised and interested in this event. We stood there for about 30 minutes, after that we went to home.

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