Corrections · 14
20150207
一次性产品的质量不够好,用一次就应该扔仍。可是,一般来说,关于吃饭用的一次性产品的东西餐具,我的同屋不认同注意这个看法。尽管,c,等等,他们都有,但还是会存储一次性的这类东西。<--Despite though they already own plates, bowls, forks, spoons, and so on, they still save disposable food items. 只有当要是他们没有为吃饭的餐具时东西,我才可以明白他们为什么想存储。<--- If they didn't have anything with which to hold and eat their food, then I would understand why they save disposable food items. 我的同屋一去韩国的餐馆买饭回宿舍吃,吃完了以后就把餐具留下来狗食袋洗,再并放在厨房架子上。<---Right after they eat Korean takeout, they save the containers and utensils which they then put into the kitchen cupboard. 他们的优点是不想浪费东西。要是他们存储一次性产品的质量不错或者不太多大,就好了。If the items they saved were of such bad quality or if they didn't save to many, then there would be no problem. 但是不是这样。大蒜让容器变得很臭狗食袋臭,其时臭到的我受不了。<---Garlic makes the containers really smelly, so smelly that I cannot bear them. 他们的一次性餐具狗食袋甚至于多得柜子没有空把别非一次性的餐具放的东西方在这儿(or 这里)这儿里!<---In fact, there are so many saved disposable food containers and utensils that there isn't any room for the reusable items! 还有,他们连第一次用过一次以后以外,就不再用了。<---And then except for the first use, my roommates never reuse the saved single-use items. 换言之总之,他们好像节省了村资源,实际上只是在浪费空间。In other words, my roommates seem to be saving resources, but in reality they are just wasting space.
Tips:
In chinese, when we say 餐具 , it could including plates, bowls, forks, spoons and so on. This is different from English saying containers and utensils.
20150207
一次性产品的质量不够好,用一次就应该仍扔。可是,一般来说,关于吃饭用的一次性产品的东西餐具,我的同屋不注意同意这个看法。尽管,盘子,叉子,勺子,等等,他们都有,还存储一次性的这类东西。<--Despite though they already own plates, bowls, forks, spoons, and so on, they still save disposable food items. 要是他们没有为吃饭的东西餐具,才可以明白他们为什么想存储。<--- If they didn't have anything with which to hold and eat their food, then I would understand why they save disposable food items. 我的同屋一去韩国的餐馆买饭回宿舍吃,吃完了以后就把狗食袋洗干净,再放厨房架子上。<---Right after they eat Korean takeout, they save the containers and utensils which they then put into the kitchen cupboard. 他们的优点是不想浪费东西。要是他们存储一次性产品的质量不错或者数量不太大,就好了。If the items they saved were of such bad quality or if they didn't save to many, then there would be no problem. 但是不是这样。大蒜让狗食袋臭,其时真实臭的得我受不了。<---Garlic makes the containers really smelly, so smelly that I cannot bear them. 他们的狗食袋甚至于多得让柜子里没有空把再放别的东西方在这儿里!<---In fact, there are so many saved disposable food containers and utensils that there isn't any room for the reusable items! 还有,他们连除第一次用过以外,不再用。<---And then except for the first use, my roommates never reuse the saved single-use items. 总之他们好像村存资源,实际上只是在浪费空间。In other words, my roommates seem to be saving resources, but in reality they are just wasting space.
I agree with you.
20150207
一次性产品的质量不够好,用一次就应该仍扔。可是,一般来说,关于吃饭一次性产品的东西,我的同屋不注同意这个看法。尽管,盘子,叉子,勺子,等等,他们都有,还存储一次性的这类东西。<--Despite though they already own plates, bowls, forks, spoons, and so on, they still save disposable food items. 要是他们没有吃饭的东西,这还能理解。<--- If they didn't have anything with which to hold and eat their food, then I would understand why they save disposable food items. 我的同屋一去韩国的餐馆买饭回宿舍吃,吃完了以后就把狗食袋洗干净,再放厨房架子上。<---Right after they eat Korean takeout, they save the containers and utensils which they then put into the kitchen cupboard. 他们的优点是不想浪费东西。要是他们存储一次性产品的质量不错或者不太大,就好了。If the items they saved were of such bad quality or if they didn't save to many, then there would be no problem. 但是不是这样。大蒜让狗食袋臭,其时实臭的我受不了。<---Garlic makes the containers really smelly, so smelly that I cannot bear them. 他们的狗食袋甚至于多得柜子没有空地方把别的东西方放在这儿里!<---In fact, there are so many saved disposable food containers and utensils that there isn't any room for the reusable items! 还有,他们连第一次用过以外,不再用。<---And then except for the first use, my roommates never reuse the saved single-use items. 总之他们好像是在村存资源,实际上只是浪费空间。In other words, my roommates seem to be saving resources, but in reality they are just wasting space.(yes,I agree with you!you are handsome~)
20150207
一次性产品的质量不够好,用一次就应该仍扔。可是(it's a bit unnatural to use 可是in this sentence,use 但是 would be better ),一般来说,关于吃饭一次性产品的东西(对于与饮食相关的一次性产品),我的同屋室友不注意赞同这个看法。尽管,盘子,叉子,勺子,等等,他们都有,(尽管,他们有像盘子、叉子、勺子等等这些饮食用具,他们)还存储一次性的这类东西。<--Despite though they already own plates, bowls, forks, spoons, and so on, they still save disposable food items. 要是他们没有为吃饭用来吃饭的东西,我才可以明白他们为什么想存储要一次性的东西。<--- If they didn't have anything with which to hold and eat their food, then I would understand why they save disposable food items. 我的同屋(同屋的)一去韩国的餐馆买饭回宿舍吃,吃完了以后就把狗食袋洗留着盒子跟餐具,再放厨房架子上。<---Right after they eat Korean takeout, they save the containers and utensils which they then put into the kitchen cupboard. 他们的优点是不想浪费东西。要是他们存储留着的一次性产品的质量不错或者不太大,就好了。If the items they saved were of such bad quality or if they didn't save to many, then there would be no problem. 但是不是这样。大蒜让狗食袋盒子特别臭,其时有时臭的我受不了。<---Garlic makes the containers really smelly, so smelly that I cannot bear them. 他们留着的狗食袋盒子甚至于多得(多的甚至于)柜子里没有空把别的东西(”别的东西“is correct but if you want to say reuable then it's 能重复使用的)方放在这儿里(放这儿里seems Ok but it's a little strange I prefer 放下)!<---In fact, there are so many saved disposable food containers and utensils that there isn't any room for the reusable items! 还有,他们连第一次用过以外之后,就不再用了。<---And then except for the first use, my roommates never reuse the saved single-use items. 总之他们好像是在村存资源,实际上只是在浪费空间。In other words, my roommates seem to be saving resources, but in reality they are just wasting space.
20150207
一次性产品的质量不够好,用一次就应该仍。可是,一般来说,关于吃饭一次性产品的东西,我的同屋不注意这个看法。尽管,盘子,叉子,勺子,等等,他们都有,还存储一次性的这类东西。<--Despite though they already own plates, bowls, forks, spoons, and so on, they still save disposable food items. 要是他们没有为吃饭的东西,才可以明白他们为什么想存储。<--- If they didn't have anything with which to hold and eat their food, then I would understand why they save disposable food items. 我的同屋一去韩国的餐馆买饭回宿舍吃,吃完了以后就把狗食袋洗,再放厨房架子上。<---Right after they eat Korean takeout, they save the containers and utensils which they then put into the kitchen cupboard. 他们的优点是不想浪费东西。要是他们存储一次性产品的质量不错或者不太大,就好了。If the items they saved were of such bad quality or if they didn't save to many, then there would be no problem. 但是不是这样。大蒜让狗食袋臭,其时臭的我受不了。<---Garlic makes the containers really smelly, so smelly that I cannot bear them. 他们的狗食袋甚至于多得柜子没有空把别的东西方在这儿里!<---In fact, there are so many saved disposable food containers and utensils that there isn't any room for the reusable items! 还有,他们连第一次用过以外,不再用。<---And then except for the first use, my roommates never reuse the saved single-use items. 总之他们好像村省资源,实际上只浪费空间。In other words, my roommates seem to be saving resources, but in reality they are just wasting space.
看了好久,自己觉得有些语句不是很通顺,但是不知道怎么改!就发现了一个明显的错字。
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