Funny song! :)

Hello everyone! I just wanted to share my new discovery with you. It a song called "dumb ways to die" by Tangerine Kitty. It was an advertising campaign which aimed to make people aware of the risks around trains. It lists all sort of ways to die without paying attention, but it's actually a pretty cheerful and funny song :D I just can't get enough of it. Here is the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJNR2EpS0jw

'It a song' :  It is a song

' "dumb ways to die" :  "Dumb Ways to Die"  [title therefore capitals]

'all sort of ways' :  all sorts of ways

'without paying attention' :  by not paying attention

I'm doubtful that cheerful and amusing ditties work as effectively as shock-horror tactics.

Funny song! :)

Hello everyone! I just wanted to share my new discovery with you. It's a song called "Dumb Ways to Die," by Tangerine Kitty. It was is an advertising campaign which aimed to make people aware of the risks around trains to bring awareness to the risks posed by trains. It lists all sorts of ways to die without paying attention, but it's actually a pretty cheerful and funny song :D I just can't get enough of it. Here is the link:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IJNR2EpS0jw

-Parallelism is incredibly important in English. Try not to hop from tense to tense when writing. 

-"All sorts of ways" is a phrase used only in colloquial English. Avoid using it when writing in formal English.