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simple life Yesterday morning, i walked under the tree, a slight of sunlight exposure in my face, i 'm thinking that :" today is a good day !" but unfortunately, afternoon the sky became cloudy, And it started to rain. At this moment, i took out an umbrella, and i wear my raincoat, went out from my house, i'm not crazy, Just want to feel some cold airs and the rains. You can hear frogs are singing, no birds flying on the sky, That is a peaceful raining day. sometimes, you need a sunny day, But sometimes u need a raining day to remind you how is the life goes on. Nothing is perfect, but sometimes defect is good.

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simple life

Yesterday morning, i walked under thea tree, and while a slight bit of sunlight exposure in hit my face,
I was i 'm thinking that :" Today is a good day!"
But unfortunately,
in the afternoon the sky became cloudy,
and it started to rain.

At this moment,
i took out an umbrella,
and i wearput on my raincoat,
 and went out from my house(*"outside" or "out into the rain"). I'm not crazy, 
I just wanted to feel some cold airs and the rains.

When you can hear frogs are singing, and no birds are flying inon the sky; 
that is a peaceful rainingy day.
Sometimes, you need a sunny day,
But sometimes you need a rainingy day to remind you how is the life goes on.
Nothing is perfect, but sometimes  a defect is good.

 

*There isn't anything wrong with the phrase "went out from my house" but usually you would say "went outside" or "went out into the rain".

 

I am from Western Washington, so I like the rain as well =). That was very poetic, nice job =).

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今日も良い一日になるといいですね!

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