•Write about a travel experience

Today I will write about my travel experience ! I have ever (only) been to four forign (foreign) countries ! Today I will write (about) my experience(s) that i from when i went to from my trip to Thailand ! I  When it was summer vacation (and), which (at the time), i was a 2 grads of college student, I went to Thailand with my three friends! We stayed (for) three days.
1day(on the first day) 
When we got to Thailand, it was night, so we (decided to eat) ate dinner at restaurant near our hotel and (then) we ask(ed) (the receptionist) hotelman to tell us (about some) enjoy(able) place(s) !! So they told us, sexy dance show!! We decided to go to the show, and we were guided by them. we were taken (to a) suspicious back alley, and he pointed (towards) one (specific) house.(But) then my friends, who are Syunsuke and Kazu, suddenly went back to hotel because (they were creeped out) of scary! But Ryosuke and I decided to enter the house, because we (had) have never been to (a place) like (this before) place. when we opened (the) heavy door, we watched (witnessed) (an) unbelievable spectacle! on stage, there is (was) one naked girl and she danced ! ( it was too sexy to explane(explain) this note. if you want to know , please send direct message to me!haha) While we were very excited, two girls came. And they sat besides us, and they ask(ed) us to buy juice! I thought they are (since they weren't) not cute, so I dont (that i didn't) want to buy (them anything). , But we (still) bought it for her (only) because we were very excited. And they enticed us, so we felt onerous and we (decided) got out (to leave) that house.
We could get (got) some very precious experience (from this trip)!! from 1 day (day 1), I had a good time , and I thought (beforehand) that this travel (to Thailand) will (would) be (some really) fun days!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would write three days , but Im tired , so today I stop writing .
Thank you for reading!!!