first day well, this is my first entrance. i hope find someone who wants, tell me how get a better writing skill, because i think is terrible, but thats the idea write write. i have tried to f

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EDGAR OSWALDO

first day well, this is my first entrance. i hope find someone who wants, tell me how get a better writing skill, because i think is terrible, but thats the idea write write. i have tried to find partners to want have a conversation exchange, i am patient and im very worry for my english. l hope to study in september a MBA in germany, the program is in english. i am a business manager i am married and i have three sons, my only intention is grow up my english skills, if i can find someone who wants increase his spanish skills, i am glad to help him/her thanks for your time, and read my first lines. best regards edgar

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First day

Well, this is my first entrance entry. I hope [I will] find someone who wants [to] tell me how get a better writing skills, because I think is [my skills are] terrible; but that's the idea: write, write!

Ihave tried to find partners to that want have a conversation exchange. I am patient and I'm very worry worried for about my English.

l hope to study [for my MBA] in September a MBA in Germany. The program is in English.

I am a business manager. I am married and I have three sons. My only intention is grow up
[improve] my English skills. if i can find [If there is] someone who wants increase his their Spanish skills, I am glad to help him/her.

Thanks for your time, and read my first lines.

Best regards,

Edgar

Hola Edgar! En ingles, es importante utilizar el capital para los nombres de personas y países.

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