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Not a perfect holiday I went to France a week ago,maybe it wasn't a perfect holiday,but is a unforgettable holiday experience. When I got to the hotel in the mountain, I was happy to see the snow,because this my ski holiday. The second day,I with my boyfriend to the mountains enjoyed the snowboarding feeling. Our was luck to met a Chinese couple,they were kind person. Unlucky was this night I found I lost the mobile phone. But the hotel restaurant had lot of delicious French food,they were comforted me sad feeling. I try to tell myself 'maybe lost the phone wasn't a bad things' The third day,I with my boyfriend went to the ski service station in the hilltop, try to found something about my phone, but unlucky was our couldn't found it. And this night I found I twist my ankle. I relax a day then went to snowboard with my boyfriend and the Chinese couple together. I could snowboard some red runs and all blue runs that made me happy. A few days later we made the friend with the Chinese couple,they also lived in the uk,that is a interesting things.I think when we come to uk, we can have a dinner party. This was my ski holiday, though many things had happened, I think it was still an enjoyable holiday.

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Not a perfect holiday

I went to France a week ago, it wasn't a perfect holiday, but it is an unforgettable holiday experience especially when I got to the hotel in the mountain, I was happy to see the snow, because this was my skiing holiday.
The second day, I wen to the mountains with my boyfriend and enjoyed snowboarding. We were lucky to meet a Chinese couple, they were kind people, unluckily, I lost my mobile phone the same night. The hotel's restaurant had lots of delicious French food. I tried to tell myself that maybe losing the phone wasn't a bad things.
The third day, I was with my boyfriend, we went to the ski service station in the hilltop to try finding my phone, but unluckily we couldn't find it, and in the same night I foundout I twisted my ankle.
The next day I had to relax, then went snowboarding with my boyfriend and the Chinese couple together. I was able to snowboard some red runs, and all blue runs which made me happy.
A few days later, we made new friends with the Chinese couple, they also lived in the uk which was  interesting, once come back to the UK, we might have a dinner party with our new friend that we met.
That was all about my ski holiday, even though many bad things happened, it was an enjoyable experience.

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