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The first time swim I love sport.Swiming is my favourate sport.I remember the first time i go to swim.That was a nice day.We went to swimming pool in afternoon.I counldn't swim well so water of the swim pool flow into my mouth.The water was so much.So that i counldn't eat anything in night

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The first time swim

I love sport.Swiming is my favourate sport.I remember the first time i go to swim.That was a nice day.We went to swimming pool in afternoon.I counldn't swim well so water of the swim pool flow into my mouth.The water was so much.So that i counldn't eat anything in night

 

My First Time Swimming

 

I love sports.  Swimming is my favourite sport.  I remember the first time I went swimming.  It was a nice day.  We went to the swimming pool in the afternoon.  I couldn't swim well so the water of the swimming pool flowed into my mouth.  Since there had been a lot of water in my mouth, it was difficult to eat during the evening. 

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The first time swim

I love sport.Swiming is my favourate sport.I remember the first time I wentto swim.That was a nice day.We went to swimming pool in the afternoon.I counldn't swim well so water of the swim pool flew into my mouth.The water was so much.So that I counldn't eat anything in night

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