A Bad Day
I felt so upset today , because I got a message that I didn't pass the eaxm of N2. If I had more two points , I could get the certificate of it. But I cannot go back and tell me that you are supposed to work harder. Everything has happened and I cannot let the bad mood grip me , so I saw a movie with my favorate cake Tiramisu and a cup of black tea. After the happy time passed , I believe I can let it go and move on.
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A Bad Day
I felt so upset today , because I got a message (telling me or saying) that I didn't pass the/my N2 eaxm of N2. If I had more two more points , I could get the certificate of it. But I cannot go back and tell me myself that you are supposed to work harder. Everything has happened (or: It is too late) and I cannot let the bad mood grip me , so I saw (better: watched) a movie with (and had some of) my favorate (sp: favourite) Tiramisu cake Tiramisu and a cup of black tea. After the happy time passed , I believe I can was able to let it go and move on.Well done! Doreen Qiu. Writing short texts like this is a great way to practice your English. I have only corrected the language that really needs to be changed, and if you'd like to look at some of the other possibilities here, please get in touch :)
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