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Some people believe that it is better for small children to grow up in a small town. As far as I’m concern, I think it is better for small children to grow up in a big city. There are couple of reasons. First, if small children grow up in a big city, they can share more benefit resource. For instance, in a big city, there are a lot of good schools which has sufficient educational instruments, if small children grow up in a big city, they will gain much better education. Small children can also have a lot of chance to participate many interesting activities, just like visiting museum, listen to the concert, watch movie etc and all these kind of activities are useful to children’s intelligence. Second, since grow up in a big city, children will have more capacity to adapt the city lives in the future. In conclusion, I think the letter is better. Although the suggestion might have some negative effects, for example, serious pollution and traffic jam will always threaten the children’s health and life, but if we take good care of children in our daily life, I don’t think there will much to be worried about.

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You have been studying English for a while I can tell. Longer than I have been studying Tibetan, I would guess. But you need some refinements. I would help you learn those if you wanted. I am an English speaker from America. I would like to do voice chat also. Please contact me. My name is Opal.

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