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Does this sentence sound correct? It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 


It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much, resulting  in making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage so much somebody by ending with making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.


It is so stupid when specialised (specialized = American, so not incorrect) discourage somebody so much by making them hate what they are supposed to love.

 

I don't like this sentence though, it feels a little disjointed. Perhaps - "It isn't good that specialised schools discourage people from learning/studying, by making them hate what they love". 

What do you mean by specialised schools?

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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialised schools discourage somebody so much that, in the end, it makes them hate something that they loved previously.

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Does this sentence sound correct?

It's so stupid when specialized schools discourage somebody so much that they end up making him/her hate what s/he's supposed to love.

 

Correction notes: Very good! Just needed to rearrange a few words!

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