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Sunday
My Sunday
I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying talking about how cool my Sunday was. This one Sunday, however, had was nothing special. I woke up late as usual; ,had lunch, and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found told them an excuse and stayed home.
Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though. Especially because the soccer team I love and support my favorite soccer team won its game.
At night Later, I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got went home at around 9 p.m. because I had to work as a security guard during the later that night. I watch a gas station during all night long here in my city.
(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)
Sunday
My Sunday
I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying how cool my Sunday was. This one, however, had nothing special. I woke up late as usual; had lunch and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found an excuse and stayed home.
Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though. Specially because the soccer team I love and support won its game.
At night I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got home at around 9 p.m. because I had to work as a security guard during the night. I watch a gas station during all night long here in my city.
(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)
'my Sunday was' : my Sunday had been
'had nothing special.' : was nothing special.
'cozy' : cosy
'stayed home' : stayed at home [UK English]
'pretty fun' : fun/enjoyable /pretty good, but not 'pretty fun'
' . . though. Specially . . ' : . . though, especially . .
'during all night long' : throughout the night
Sunday
My Sunday
I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying how cool my Sunday was. This one, however, had nothing special. I woke up late as usual, had lunch and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found an excuse to stayed home.
Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though, especially because the soccer team I love and support won its game.
At night I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got home at around 9 p.m. because I work as a security guard during the night. I watch a gas station all night long here in my city.
(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)
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