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Sunday My Sunday I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying how cool my Sunday was. This one, however, had nothing special. I woke up late as usual; had lunch and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found an excuse and stayed home. Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though. Specially because the soccer team I love and support won its game. At night I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks. I got home at around 9 p.m. because I had to work as a security guard during the night. I watch a gas station during all night long here in my city. (please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)

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Sunday

My Sunday

I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying talking about how cool my Sunday was. This one Sunday, however, had was nothing special. I woke up late as usual; ,had lunch, and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found told them an excuse and stayed home.

Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though. Especially because the soccer team I love and support my favorite soccer team won its game.

At night Later, I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got went home at around 9 p.m. because I had to work as a security guard during the later that night. I watch a gas station during all night long here in my city.

(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)

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Sunday

My Sunday

I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying how cool my Sunday was. This one, however, had nothing special. I woke up late as usual; had lunch and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found an excuse and stayed home.

Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though. Specially because the soccer team I love and support won its game.

At night I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got home at around 9 p.m. because I had to work as a security guard during the night. I watch a gas station during all night long here in my city.

(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)

 

'my Sunday was'  :  my Sunday had been

'had nothing special.' :  was nothing special.

'cozy' :  cosy

'stayed home' :  stayed at home [UK English]

'pretty fun' :  fun/enjoyable /pretty good,  but not 'pretty fun'

' . . though. Specially . . ' :  . . though, especially . .

'during all night long' :  throughout the night

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Sunday

My Sunday

I wrote an entry here on iTalki the other day, saying how cool my Sunday was. This one, however, had nothing special. I woke up late as usual, had lunch and then I came back to my room where I spent the whole afternoon. A couple of friends called me up, asking me to go out with them. As I was feeling pretty lazy and my bed was so cozy, I found an excuse to stayed home.

Basically, I spent the whole afternoon eating and watching soccer games. It was pretty fun for me, though, especially because the soccer team I love and support won its game.

At night I went out with a few friends. We played some pool and had some drinks.
I got home at around 9 p.m. because I work as a security guard during the night. I watch a gas station all night long here in my city.

(please let me know if there's something that could be expressed in a more natural way, even if it's not grammatically incorrect)

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