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My first session with an italki teacher Aiza Tonight I have my first session with an italki teacher Aiza.I feel good and a little of nervous.At the beginning the teacher asked me to introduce my self and she introduced her too.She is a nurse of ICU in hospital .She said 'her work is stressful and depressing '.She like watching TV ,movies(animation) when she is free.She is good at teaching English .

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My First Session With An Italki Teacher Aiza


Tonight I have had my first session with an italki teacher, Aiza. I feel felt good and a little of nervous. At the beginning the teacher asked me to introduce myself and she introduced her herself too. She is a nurse of in an ICU in of a hospital. She said 'her work is stressful and depressing '. She likes watching TV, and movies (animation) when she is free. She is good at teaching English.

 

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1) The first letter of each word in a title should be capitalized. 

2) Please take note of the placement of punctuation marks in the corrected paragraph. 

3) The fourth sentence could also be written another way. She is an ICU nurse in a hospital.

4) Quotation marks would be used to quote what your teacher actually said.  Also, you should use the mark with two strokes (I do not know the formal term), as follows. She said: "My work is stressful and depressing."

 

Good job.

 

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My first session with an italki teacher Aiza

Tonight I have my first session with an italki teacher Aiza.I feel good and a little of nervous.At the beginning the teacher asked me to introduce myself and she introduced herSELF, too. She is a nurse of ICU in hospital .She said that her work was stressful and depressing. She likeS watching TV ,movies (animation) when she HAS A SPARE TIME. She is good at teaching English .

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