silence is gold
when we talk about the famous proverb "silence is gold",we should not simply label it as right or wrong,but explore it in depth.
this proverb is expecially true in several situations. first,if we have promised not to let on a secret,we should always keep silence.second,we should avoid talking about facts we are not sure.third,whenever we are expressing our ideas,we should remember that brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.
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Silence is golden
When we talk about the famous proverb "silence is gold,"we should not simply label it as right or wrong, but explore it in depth.
This proverb is expecially true in several situations. First, if we have promised not to let on about a secret, we should always keep silent. Second, we should avoid talking about facts we are not sure of. Third, whenever we are expressing our ideas, we should remember that brevity is the soul of wit and talking too much will always lead to faults and mistakes.
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Quite well written; you have some more advanced vocabulary and grammar in this paragraph. Things to note:
1. When you have a punctuation mark such as a comma, always leave a space immediately after it
2. After a full stop (period) the next letter must always be a capital
3. Whenever you use a punctuation mark immediately after inverted commas ("") it must always go inside the quotation marks: "like this," for example
Otherwise, the only issue I can see are some minor spelling errors. Keep practicing :)
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