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Could someone corrects me these texts? thanks :) Hello Jo. What's up! I write you because I have to delay your visit. I' m sorry so much but My parents need all beds free so my brother and his wife will come for next two weeks.I'm very happy because I miss him a lot. You could visit me in May. What do you think? I'm looking forward to see you. A hug! Hello Jo! How are you doing? I'm very happy to talk with you. Yes, I love to go to the cinema. My boyfriend and me go every weekend. It's really funny. I love music movies and triller it depends on the moment I wach one or because sometimes we watch love movies. The last movie I watched was 'Hunger games'. It's an interesting fiction movie but the movie has love scenes too. I love so much because it's very different from the movies that I usually watch. I recommend you watch it if you can. I would like to go with you to the cinema very soon and we can go to the bar to have a drink after. See you soon. KISSES An exciting adventure I were with my friends in the countryside to spend my off days together in a little village near the sea. I was really happy and I thought those days will be very funny. The first day we went to walk along of the hill. We was talking when we heard a strange noise. We thought that it could be a wild animal. I was very frightened because I didn't known the animal maked the noise. In that moment I heard a cry. We went very fast I find a man injured. We helped him to go down from the hill to the camping and we rang to the hospital. It was a fantastic adventure and very exciting.

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Could someone corrects me these texts? thanks :)

Hello Jo. What's up! I write you am writing you because I have to delay your visit. I'm so sorry, so much but my parents need all the beds free so that my brother and his wife will be able to come for the next two weeks._I'm very happy because I miss him a lot. You could visit me in May. What do you think? I'm looking forward to seeing you.

A hug!

Hello Jo! How are you doing? I'm very happy to talk with you. Yes, I would love to go to the cinema. My boyfriend and me I go every weekend. It's really funny (Fun...amusing). I love music, movies and triller it depends on the moment I wach one or because sometimes we watch love movies.(I love music. I also love movies, escpecially thrillers, but it depends on the moment, because sometimes my boyfriend and I like to watch romantic movies.) The last movie I watched was 'Hunger games'. It's an interesting fictional movie but the movie has love scenes too aswell. I love it so much because it's very different from the movies that I usually watch. I recommend that you watch it if you can. I would like to go with you to the cinema very soon, and we can go to the bar to have a
drink afterwards. See you soon. KISSES

An exciting adventure.
I were was with my friends in the countryside to spend my off days our days off together in a little village near the sea.
I was really happy, and I thought those days will would be very funny. The first day we went to for a walk along of the hill.
We was were talking when we heard a strange noise. We thought that it could be have been a wild animal. I was very frightened because I didn't known the animal maked made the noise. In that moment I heard a cry. We went(ran) very fast, I find and found a man injured. We helped him to go down from the hill to the camping (camping area.....campsite)and we rang to (called)the hospital. It was a fantastic adventure and very exciting.

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You seem to be having a little difficulty with Past and Present Tense. I think this is very common, but overall it is very good. :D

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