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I was very shocked to hear bad news Today I heard very bad news... It said that my previous work place has gone bankrupt... I have worked for 6 years when I was a college student. I loved my work place ,owner, colleague ,customer.... The news made me so sad, depress,disappointed I hope good things will happen tomorrow

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I was very shocked to hear bad news today.

Today I heard very bad news... (you don't need to repeat this sentence again)


It said The bad news was that my previous workplace has gone bankrupt.(workplace is one word)


I have had worked for that company for 6 years when I was a college student. (you must use had if you are talking about the past)

I loved my workplace, the owner, my colleagues, and the customers. 

The news made me so sad, depressed, and disappointed

I hope good things will happen tomorrow, because of the bad news I received today.

 

I'm sorry to hear the news about your previous workplace. I hope you made a lot of happy memories there. :)

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