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a small holidays in the beach hello to all, the last month I went to the beach a small holidays was awesome and I feel very good because was very funny and I meet a lot people and I see too many friends, and then we went to barquisimeto (city from Venezuela) we saw to family over there and I meet the little dog is very pretty, then we ate at the restaurant on park avenue. but we arrive the 24 of december and all follow normal in ouer lifes:) PD: thanks for the correction I vote for the best correction, too ;)

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a small holidays in the beach

hello to all, the last month I went to the beach a small holidays was awesome and I feel very good because was very funny and I meet a lot people and I see too many friends, and then we went to barquisimeto (city from Venezuela) we saw to family over there and I meet the little dog is very pretty, then we ate at the restaurant on park avenue. but we arrive the 24 of december and all follow normal in ouer lifes:)


PD: thanks for the correction I vote for the best correction, too ;)

A Small Holiday at the Beach

Hello to all, last month I went to the beach for a brief holiday.  The holiday was awesome and I feel very good because I met a lot of people.  What is very funny and interesting is that now I feel I have too many friends.  We went to Barquisimeto (a city in Venezuela).  While there we met a family with a little dog that was quite pretty.  Later, we ate at the restaurant on Park Avenue.  

We returned home on the 24th of December and my normal life began again.

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I enjoyed reading your post and I appreciate the opportunity to respond.  I am new on Italki, so if you can't find me today, please continue to seek me out and I hope we can share more about your vacation.
Dr. Priscilla
Italki Professional Teacher (Native English Speaker in the U.S.) 

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