Why do so many people like Jackson's music?
Actually, I cannot answer well to this questions because I don't know too about Michael Jackson's music. I think that it may be because it was a very good singer and his songs are great. I know only his song "We are the world" because when I was a child, I used to sing it in the school. Perhaps, the key of his success is that his songs are very different than other famous singers or because some them treat about problems world.
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You have done very well Sandra. I have made a few corrections for you below.
Why do so many people like Michael Jackson's music?
Actually, I cannot answer well to this questions very well because I don't know too much about Michael Jackson's music. I think that it may be because he was a very good singer and his songs are great. I know only his only know the song "We are the world" because when I was a child, I used to sing it in the school when I was a child. Perhaps, the key to his success is that his songs are very different from other famous singers or because some of his songs address problems in the world.
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Why do so many people like Michael Jackson's music?
Actually, I cannot answer well to this questions because I don't know too much about Michael Jackson's music. I think that it may be because he it was a very good singer and his songs are great. I know only of his song "We are the world" from because when I was a child, I used to sing it in the school. Perhaps, the key to of his success is that his songs are very different from than other famous singers or because some them treat about problems world.
I am uncertain of what you mean here "because some them treat about problems world." Some possible options that would work are.
because some of them talk about problems of the world.
because some of them try to fix problems of the world.
Hope this helps.
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He was a genius, a king of show. He did everything to entertain people, every little detail was perfect. If you are in London, you can watch a great musical called "Thriller" in Lyric theatre, it's a copy of Jackson's last show.
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