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Facilities in my town

Currently, I live in a large town with excellent sports facilities such as, two sports centre(centers) which have 10 tennis court(courts), two athletic tracks, two outdoor swimming pool(pools), one indoor olympic size, two weight rooms, (and) one aerobic and spinning room. I really think they are fantastic. The problem is (that) I (have) realize(realized) that facilities are so good for amateur athletes(,) but I think that we don’t have good venues for professional athletes.

(The) Most(most) well-known venue in my town is the football pitch(field). It take(takes) place in(on) a hill. In fact, one side of the seats is(are) over the hill. It is really nice. The football team plays in the national championship and(, the)whole town is very proud of his own(the) team. People is(are) really keen when they talk(to) each other about our team. Even though(the) score is not always good. Equipment is blue and white.

In the past, I used to practice several sports like running, cycling, hiking in the mountains, even I(I even) loved diving, but I hurt my ankle(.) and now,(Now) I have a small disability and really, I cannot practice sports anymore, so nowadays I have taken on it and I have taken up other activities like reading good books or studying english.

And this(This) is all.
I have attached a picture of our football pitch (field). (It is) Is really nice, doesn't(isn't) it? :)

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Facilities in my town
Currently, I live in a large town with excellent sports facilities such as, two sports centers which have 10 tennis courts, two athletic tracks, two outdoor swimming pools, one indoor olympic size, two weight rooms, and one aerobic and spinning room. I really think they are fantastic. The problem is that I have realized that facilities are so good for amateur athletes, but I think that we don’t have good venues for professional athletes.

The most well-known venue in my town is the football field. It takes place on a hill. In fact, one side of the seats are over the hill. It is really nice. The football team plays in the national championship and, the whole town is very proud of his own(the) team. People are really keen when they talk to each other about our team. Even though the score is not always good.

In the past, I used to practice several sports like running, cycling, hiking in the mountains, I even loved diving, but I hurt my ankle. Now I have a small disability and really, I cannot practice sports anymore, so nowadays I have taken up other activities like reading good books or studying english.

This is all.
I have attached a picture of our football field. It is really nice, isn't it? :)

Facilities in my town

Currently[i think it is better to use 'Now'], I live in a large town with excellent sports facilities, such as two sports centres which have 10 tennis courts, two athletic tracks, two outdoor swimming pools, one indoor olympic size, two weight rooms, one aerobic and spinning room. I really think they are fantastic[How about 'fascinating']. The problem is that I realize that these facilities are so good for amateur athletes, but I think that we don’t have good venues for professional athletes.

The most well-known venue in my town is the football pitch. It take place is located in a hill. In fact, one side of the seats is over the hill. It is really nice. The football team plays in the national championship and whole town is very proud of his its own team. People is are really keen[Maybe 'enthusiastic' will be better] when they talk each other about our team each other, even though score is not always good. The colour of equipment is are blue and white.

In the past, I used to practice several sports like running, cycling, hiking in the mountains. Even I loved diving, but I hurt my ankle and now, I have a small disability and really, I cannot practice sports anymore. So nowadays I have taken on it and I have taken up[participated in]other activities like reading good books or studying English. [In general, reading books or studying English is not 'activity'.]

And this is all.
I have attached a picture of our football pitch. It is really nice, doesn't it? :)