Letter of motivation (I have never heard it called this before, in the UK we call it a 'covering letter'.

I have tried to re-write some of your phrases which sound strange to a native speaker. It is important that if you are applying for a job that you sound professional.

Hi everyone :) I have to write a letter of motivation covering letter to apply for a job and I was wondering if you could help me. Could you give me some advices? Here is what I have you have what I have wrote:

My name is Rosa, I am eighteen years old and I am from Girona located in Catalonia (Spain). I would like to have the opportunity of live a new experience working in Devon while I am working in for your company for a couple of months on this Summer.

Currently, I am in my a first year of university, studying the first year of Nursing at the University of Girona and. At the same time I’m learning English at a language academy known as “EOI” (official school languages). So  One of my objectives reasons for applying is to improve my level of English during my stay in the UK. and show you my qualities during I upgrade them.

Since I was young (a child), I have helped been helping my parents on their farm and with their country house (bed and breakfast), dealing with bookings, answering customer’s questions and preparing the rooms, etc. Last Summer, I started worked in a restaurant as an assistant waitress and actually currently I’m working during the weekends. So, I am interested to in applying for the position of waitress and shop assistant positions, or maybe shop assistant but I’m flexible open to any type of job.

I always try to do my best give the greatest of me with all my efforts, and you will see that I have a very hard-working personality. Moreover, I am a responsible and patient person and very open-minded too.

On the other hand, I’m in love with I also love travelling and meeting new people. This is the reason why I would like to have a job that means stay brings me into contact with customers the consumers. I consider that smiling and showing a good impression to the people around you is the most relevant. I always try to smile and make a good impression on the people around me.

I am completely sure that I will enjoy living in the United Kingdom while I work and practice English, meeting new people and learning experiencing the culture of there, it could be fantastic!

Thank you for your time and consideration,
I am looking forward to hearing from you, I will be very happy!

Sincerely,
Rosa

Letter of motivation

Hi everyone :) I have to wirte write a letter of motivation to apply for a job and I was wondering if you could help me. Could you give me some advices advise? Here you have what I have wrote written so far:

My name is Rosa, I am eighteen years old and I am from Girona located in Catalonia (Spain).Currently, I am a first year student in Nursing at the Univresity of Girona.I am currently studying the first year of Nursing at the University of Girona and at the same time Additionally, I am learning English at an academy called “EOI” (Official School Languages). So one of My objectives is to improve my level of english (**yes?) and show you my qualities demonstrate my strengths working for your companyduring as my english improves I upgrade them (**was this what you meant?**). This is why I would like to have the opportunity of  live a new experience in Devon while I am working in for your company for a couple of months on this summer. (***here you should write what job you want instead of later.. =). when you write a cover letter for a job you 1. introduce yourself, 2. say what job you want, 3. explain why you want to work for them, 4. convince them why they want you*** :D. your letter will be much stronger if you organize it in that order)

Since I was young, I have been helping my parents on their farm and with their country house (bed and breakfast) dealing with bookings, answering customer’s questions, preparing the rooms, etc. Last summer, I started to work in a restaurant as an assistant waitress and I continue to work there during weekendsactually I’m working during the weekends. So, I am interested to apply for the position of waitress or maybe shop assistant. but I’m quite flexible to any type of job.

I am the type of person who always gives her 100% always try to give the greatest of me with all my efforts, so you will see that I have a very 'hard worker' personality. Moreover, I am a responsible, patient person and very open-minded too.

On the other hand (**on the other hand is usually used to show contrast, as in 'the opposite'.. **) I’m also in love with I also love travelling and meeting new people. This is the reason why I would like to have a service job with personal contact with costomers. I am really a people's person. that means stay in contact with the consumers. I consider believe that smiling and showing making a good impression to the people around you is the most relevant. crucial.
I am completely sure that I will enjoy living in United Kingdom while I work working, practicing English,  meeting new people and learning the local customs and culture of there, it could be fantastic!

Thank you for your time and consideration,
I am looking forward to hearing from you., I will be very happy!

Sincerely,
Rosa

(**Good luck!!! ))

Letter of motivation

Hi everyone :) I have to write a letter of motivation to apply for a job and I was wondering if you could help me. Could you give me some advices? Here you have what I have writtenote:

My name is Rosa, I am eighteen years old and I am from Girona located in Catalonia (Spain). I would like to have the opportunity of living a new experience in Devon while I am working in your company for a couple of months in summer.

Currently, I am studying  in my first year of Nursing at the University of Girona and at the same time I’m learning English at an academy known as “EOI” (official school languages). So one of my objectives is to improve my level of English and show you my progress qualities during my time at Devon.I upgrade them.

Since I was young, I have been helping my parents on their farm and with their country house (bed and breakfast) dealing with bookings, answering customer’s questions, preparing the rooms, etc. Last summer, I started in a restaurant as an assistant waitress and actually I’m working during the weekends. So, I am interested to apply for the position of waitress or maybe shop assistant but I’m flexible to any type of job.

I always try to give my best greatest of me with and converge all my efforts to attain my goals, so you will see that I have a very hard worker personality. Moreover, I am a responsible and patient person and very open-minded too.

On the other hand, I’m in love with travelling and meeting new people. This is the reason why I would like to have a job that means staying in contact with the consumers. I consider that smiling and showing conveying a good impression to the people around you is the most relevant.
I am confident completely sure that I will enjoy living in the United Kingdom and while I work, and I can practice English by meeting new people and this interaction would broaden my cultural understanding, it could be fantastic!

Thank you for your time and consideration,
I am looking forward to hearing from you, I will be very happy!

Sincerely,
Rosa