Brasil
Brazil it's a beaultiful country, has so many beaches with blue and clean water , and has a lot of excited peoples. There are so many options of leisure , like shoppings , parks , museums , pub .worth knowing !
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Brasil
Brazil it's is a beaultiful beautiful country, it has so many beaches with blue, and clean water and has a lot of excited peoples. There are so many options of leisure leisure options, like shoppings, parks, museums and pubs. It's worth knowing about!
Brazil is a beautiful country, it has so many beaches with blue, clean water and has a lot of excited people. There are so many leisure options, like shopping, parks, museums and pubs. It's worth knowing about!
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Brasil
Brazil it's is a beaultiful country, [change comma to period]
It has so many beaches with blue and clean water , and it has a lot of excited peoples ["People" is already plural. Remove the -s]. There are so many options of leisure, such as: like [remove "like"] shoppings [remove -s], parks , museums , pub[s] . It is worth knowing!
Professional Teacher's Comments:
Hello!
Brazil sounds like a beautiful place! Great note entry!
In regards to corrections, please be careful of singular and plural nouns. Also, please remember that a subject is needed in sentences.
Best,
Teacher Jeannie
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