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Internet Life... Most of people regret their life before the invention of the internet. They say : we used to be with each other more than now , We used to hang out with our friends more , we used to speak with each other more.But for me , As far as i remember , in the past , When there were no fiend near you ,When you were in a dark mood and there is no body to help you, and on the other hand you didn't have any good books to read ( or didn't have mood for reading them) in that time you should did nothing.Yea i know , Internet has changed the world completely , But key is , In every new situation ( just like the emergence of the Internet ) we should know how to deal with it ! I always thank the person who invent this interesting world.Because of this world i have met good bodies who if there is no internet maybe i couldn't find a chance to meet them. All i wanted to say is , It's all up to us , how to deal with internet life , Take it or live it , We are living in a internet life , So , let's find a way to enjoy living here :)

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Internet Life...

Most of people regret their life before the invention of the internet. They say : "We used to be with each other more than now", "We used to hang out with our friends more", "We used to speak with each other more". But for me, as far as I remember, in the past, when there were no friend near you, when you were in a dark[unhappy / miserable] mood and there is was nobody to help you, and on the other hand you didn't have any good books to read ( or didn't have weren't in the mood for reading them) in that time you should did nothing. Yea [yes] I know, the Internet has changed the world completely, but the fact key is, that in every new situation ( just like the emergence of the Internet ) we should know learn how to deal with it! I always thank the person who invented this interesting technology that chnged the world. Because of this world I have met good bodies people who if there is no I couldn't have met without the internet maybe i couldn't find a chance to meet them. All I wanted to say is [In summary], it's all up to us, to decide how to deal with Internet life. Take it or live leave it, we are living in an Internet life, so, let's find a way to enjoy living here. :)

[ .. we can't escape it, ..]

 

Mary, a space " " is not required before a comma ",".

Mostly capitalise letters at the beginning os a sentence, not after a comma.

The Internet makes it far easier to 'meet' people, but I think it tends to damage interpersonal skills because they are not face-to-face. Physically we may only be sharing our space with a computer, typing instead of talking. There's no point in kissing a computer!

Den

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All we need to, is to keep the balance.
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without internet, I can't be here and I cant read ur notebook entry :)).anyway, Internet makes my life better. I have the same idea with you.

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