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The Hunger Game
I recently read the novel 'the hunger game'.
It is a story about the survival.Every participant in the hunger game
have to kill the others in order to win the game.The last participant is the winner.
I think this novel is exciting and it make you to think more than just killing.
What if you were in the same situation like the hunger game,what would you do?
Would you chose to kill or to protect the one you love in the game?
It is hard to tell what we would do in the hunger game,and just like the slogan in the novel
"May the odds be ever in your favor'
''the hunger game'. : 'The Hunger Game' [capital letters for title]
'a story about the survival' : a story about survival
'have to kill the others' : has to kill the others
'The last participant' : The last surviving participant OR The last remaining participant / The last participant remaining (in the game)
' . . is exciting and it make you to think more than just killing.': . . is exciting, and it makes you think about more than just killing.
' . . the same situation like . . ' : . . the same situation as in . .
'Would you chose to kill or to protect . . ' : Would you choose to kill, or to protect . .
'to tell what we would do in the hunger game,and just like . . ' : to tell what we would do in the hunger game and, (just) like . .
Good effort
Note where I have inserted or amended commas [punctuation], as this can be important for meaning
The Hunger Game
I recently read the novel "The Hunger Games."
It is a story about the survival. Every participant in the hunger games
has to kill the others in order to win the game.The last person alive (不然可能不太清楚) is the winner.
I think this novel is exciting and it makes you think about more than just killing.
What if you were in the same situation as the characters in the hunger games, what would you do?
Would you had to chose to kill or to protect the one you love in the game?
It is hard to tell what we would do in the hunger games, and just like the slogan in the novel
"May the odds be ever in your favor'
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